Crime is not that something foreign we listen . Crime not only happen in our country but it also happen in other country.As we know many of people commit crime for selfish reason . I agree with this statement. Crime can be define as the activities poeple do without taking care about other people think.The factor that influence people to do crime such as want to fulfill their satisfaction,feel ashamed to family and friends,and influence from friends.
Firstly,people commit crime because want to fulfill their satisfaction.For example,they willing to do violent acts against women are not guilt,especially for teenagers so willing to rape them for their own gain and carnal.They never fear to law,what important to them is to fulfill their satisfaction.
Secondly,they commit crime because feel ashamed to people around them .For example,have couple which guilty of illicit relations before marriage until the woman was pregnant,so,to cover the genitals of their partner willing to commit criminal baby dumping of innocent everywhere.
Lastly,influence from friends also can influence someone to commit crime.Fof example,for teenagers friends are very important in their life because with friends they can share their problem between each other but in this world a lot of kind of people,sometime when the teenager wrong in choose friends that can influence their actions,maybe their friends can influence to commit crime such as rob bank.So when that happen automatically involved in youth crime and always do this crime because feel satisfaction from rob activities.
In conclusion,I strongly agree people commit crime for selfish reasons such as rape,buby dumping and rob from bank.In this cases the governmet take responsibility and think seriously and do not let this case widespread.
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